Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Won Hundred Word Wednesday


It's once again Wednesday, and therefore it's time for another





“Would you like fries with that?”

I shook my head. Counting calories wasn’t fun. But I would fit in that prom dress if it was the last thing I did. Jess said that Tamara said that Lisa said that Carrie said that Paul planned to ask me to Prom.

I took my change, and turned to fill my drink when the side door opened. Paul held the door for Melissa. They kissed as the door closed behind her. I turned back to the counter, butting in front of the couple there.


“On second thought, give me the largest you’ve got.”


Now go see what the others have come up with. 

Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot.com
Kelly Martin, Author: www.kellymartinbooks.blogspot.com
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .): http://alisonmillerwoods.wordpress.com/
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:http://thedistractedwriter.com/

7 comments:

  1. Darn those other girls stealing your guy!

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  2. Loved it. I especially love the "she said- she said-" line. (totally happens)

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  3. I also loved the"she said- she said" line, and the ending. Nothing better than fries to ease a broken heart :)

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  4. Ouch! Poor girl! can totally relate. Nice job.

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  5. That is exactly how information is relayed in high school. Good job!

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  6. Oh man. :( That hurts my heart <3

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