Reluctantly he handed over the key.
He looked into my eyes. His own brimmed with tears.
“Are you sure?” I asked.
He swallowed and nearly shook his head. His right hand clenched tight enough his knuckles turned white.
“As much as I wish it wasn’t this way, I can’t keep pretending any longer.” He looked down at his fist.
I longed to reach up and wipe away the tear that had escaped. He wouldn’t appreciate that though.
He took a slow breath and opened his hand, revealing a skeleton key. “You are now the only thing keeping the world from a slow painful death.”
No pressure.
My heart pounded wildly
I’d run as far as I could and still
didn’t know if I would live another moment. The sounds of pursuit were gone,
but the cold chill running down my spine had intensified. My heart pounded
wildly as I gasped for air.
I leaned against the brick wall,
hands splayed against the roughness, ready to bolt the second I saw signs of
danger.
But would I actually see it?
If only I had listened to my mother
when she told me not to open that old wardrobe. Whoever said it was the
entrance to Narnia must have been high.
Jerk.
Now go see the other blogs and see what they've done.
Wendy Knight, Author: www.wendyknightauthor.blogspot .com
Kelly Martin, Author: www.kellymartinbooks.blogspot. com
Alison Woods (Peering Into. . .): http:// alisonmillerwoods.wordpress.com /
Jessica Winn, The Distracted Writer:http:// thedistractedwriter.com/
R.K. Grow: http://www.rkgtheauthor.com/
Stephanie Worlton's Kreating Krazy blog: http:// stephanieworlton.blogspot.com/
Leah Sanders, inklings: http:// inklings-leahsanders.blogspot.c om/
Laura D. Bastian http://www.lauradbastian.com/
Jaclyn Weist http:// jaclynweist.blogspot.com
Amryn Scott http:// wildscottkids.wordpress.com/
K.R. Wilburn http://www.krwilburn.com/ my-blog.html
Lindzee Armstrong/Lydia Winters http:// lindzeearmstrong.blogspot.com
Kat!e Larson http:// katesnovelidea.blogspot.com
Miranda D. Nelson http:// www.mirandadnelson.blogspot.com /
Angela Schroeder http:// angelaschroederauthor.blogspot. com/
Ginny Romney http:// romneyrants.blogspot.com/
Canda Mortensen http:// candamortensen.blogspot.com
Jenna Eatough http://blog.mistglenmoon.net/
Starimprint: http:// starimprint.blogspot.com/
Oh man! I love both of those! Well done :)
ReplyDeleteLoved them both but this line in the 2nd one made me laugh
ReplyDelete"Whoever said it was the entrance to Narnia must have been high.
Jerk."
Surprise--I totally thought the first one was going a different direction. Great!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I too thought the first one was going in a totally different direction. I loved the last lines of both, well the last two lines of the second one, so fun!
ReplyDeleteAh the surprise endings. They were very well done and yes, being mislead about what something like that was would at least deserve a jerk.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. I want to know more about that key!
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